Creepypasta OC Dark Hawk OUTDATED!

This is Zella, my OC, you may review her, you don't need my say, just tell me so I can look out and know what I can fix! 👍
I think she's a bad OC, but a few people say other wise, so I want some criticism....

I'm sorry if she looks cute, sorry, it's just my art style.....

Yes, I am aware this OC is really bad! I know she is a cliché.

Name: Zella Brooke Valica. (Val-I-ca)

CreepyPasta Name: Dark Hawk.

Nick Names: Zell, Zelli, Hawk.

Age: 18.

Sexuality: Straight.

Gender: Female.

Height: 5'7 and 1/2

Weight: 149
(Without wings, mostly muscles )

Body Type: A little muscular, mostly in her legs.
(Running, kicking, etc.)

Hair: A short blonde hair cut, around the neck area.

(I just can't draw hair, so ther hair is the side view, not the front.....)

Eyes:
-Normal: Dull Dark Blue eyes.
(Forget the shine in the eyes for the drawing, her eyes are supposed to be dull, and almost, emotionless.)
-Demonic: Dull Blood Red.
(Can APPEAR purple at rare times.)

The day she became a Pasta: June 23rd 2014.
Powers:
-EXTREMELY good hearing
-Flight.
-Demonic.

Her Demon Powers: It's not that different, she only dose it to feel more powerful, as her powers are increased just a little as so are her main senses, and she can control when it comes on and stuff, it isn't why she kills.

Demon info: She uses the human form to try and trick people, even with the wings, though that's not her real form. No where close.


(Half) Demon form: Still human, eyes just turn a blood red, and voice demonic.

(Full) Demon form: Pitch black demon eyes, black horns with grey stripes out of her head, twisted, her skin looks greyish, making her look sick, and her mouth is wide, even sharper teeth.
(It's supposed to be horrifying, I don't know how to describe it.)
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Type of Demon: Normal.
(The hawk is just she's a hawk thing....)

Favorite Colors: Yellow, Purple, Blue & Red.

Voice: A slight southern accent, Alabama like, usually dropping the g's, saying ain't, gonna, wanna.

Birthday: June 28th, 1999.

Zodiac: Cancer ♋️

Blood Type: O-

Strength: 8/10
Speed: 5.5/10
Agility: 8.5/10
Charisma: 2/10
Endurance: 7/10
Stealth: 3/10
Patience: 4/10
Balance: 7/10.
Luck: 7/10
(Luck of the Irish)

Likes:
-Going in the forest at night, to find people alone.
-Her pile of "friends."
-Having a fly around.
-Getting into a fight.
-When her brother is actually nice to her.
-When people fight back.

Dislikes:
-Those people that think highly of them selfs.
-When she know she can't win against some one and but constantly wants to.
-Having to use a knife in combat.
-People playing mind tricks, or going in her mind.

Weaknesses:
-Her large wings can be an easy way to be grabbed.
-At time can be full of herself.
-The scar on her face makes her easily recognizable.
-She's often explosive and takes everything to seriously
-She's often hyper, so she will sometimes freak out.
-Healing spells/magic doesn't work on her.
-She often marks thinks around with her name "Dark Hawk" so they know who did it.
-Then the normal human weakness.....

Advantages:
-Can hear them coming from a distance
-Can fly to get away from certain people.
-She will use anything she can find to kill if she doesn't have her weapon.
-The scar on her face makes her look different from when she was younger.
-Quick to think.
-High Pain Tolerance.
(Not immune to pain...)
-EXTREMELY GOOD with hand to hand combat.
-Good with axes, as well as knifes.
-She often lets people underestimate her, not knowing the full power she has.

Other stuff:
-When she's extremely nervous, in pain, or does something that might get her in huge trouble, she digs her nails into her skin (mostly her arm) and some times making it bleed.
-Sometimes her eyes will shake/vibrate, no known reason.
-She's a thief, often steals things of importance, shiny things mostly.

Hobbies/Things she likes doing:
-Practicing her weapons.
-Walking in the woods.
-Thinking of new ways to kill.

How she kills:
-She uses her axe to slice open there necks and let them bled to death.
-If she had she has a knife, she shoves the knife into the neck, letting them choke on their own blood.
-Throws her axe into the neck, stomach, head, anywhere she can kill them, or make the most pain.
-Uses her teeth to rip out their throats. (She has sharp canine teeth but only her natural canine are sharp.)

Species: Demon Hawk.

Race: Irish/Asian

Left/Right: Ambidextrous.

Pricing: Two on both ears, yellow buds.

Weapons:
-Axes (main, it's a normal axe with (real) camo duck tape wrapped in the handle .)
-Knifes (only sometimes, mainly a hunting knife.)
-Her Sharp teeth (only when in the demonic form.)

Personalty:
-Hyper.
-Crazy
-Quick to think.
-Smartish.
-Brave.
-Perseverant.
-Determined.
-Can some times get Distracted.
-Sassy.

Demon Mode:
-Bloodthirsty.
-Completely Emotionless. (Only anger and Vengence get can be felt.)
-Ruthless.
-Full of herself.
-Overly self Confident.
-Selfish.

When she was a Kid (Before sold to the gang.):
-Hyper.
-Easily Distracted.
-Sweet.
-Innocent.
-Caring.
-Loveable.
-Not Aware of her family's issues.

During the Gang:
-Hyper.
-Distracted.
-Revengeful.
-Mean.
-Bitchy/Sassy.
-Heartless.
-Angry.

Friends & Family:
-Mother Sara Valica, (Dead, mental reasons.)
-Father William Vilica, (Missing, probably dead.)
-Dash Valica/Shadow Keeper (Fellow Pasta)
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-Victoria/Poison (A sorta friend.)
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Disorders:
-Serve ADHD
(She's slowly getting less Distracted and Hyper, but you can still see she definitely has it.)
-OCD
-A little bit of a stutter, and a hard time spelling.
(Nothing major, just like this "You know S-Sally ri-right? Ye-Yeah." Like that.)
-She often uses big/smart words.
(Sometimes not knowing what they mean.)

Clothing: A red shirt with blue jeans and brown combat/hiking boots

Accessories:
-A black spike necklace
-A belt for her axe.
(Forgot to draw it in.)

Catch Phrases:
-"Aw, are you afraid of the dark?"
(Any different form of that, She often kills when it's dark.)

Scars:
-Face, the bottom of her forehead to the middle of her cheekbone on the right side, bending the nose a little, and making the face shape look a little different. (When someone was defending themselves, and cut her face.)
-One on her arm, not self harm, from fights.
(Just regular scars from fights.)

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(Again, I just like the song, even though this one is a bit edgy, it fits her....)

(Dash/Shadow Keeper, is my brother's OC.)

Bio: W.I.P
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(This is a rough draft, the final one will be a lot longer, more descriptive and less rushed, and third person.)

The summary of her new story-

Zella was raised in an extremely poor family, her mom and dad spent almost all their money on alcohol and drugs. She had to take care of Dash, her little brother, as well of herself. She was fed, dressed, all that. She just had to do her own things. Her mother and father tried to show compassion, but they never actually cared. They sold her to a gang at five, to get more money, as selling her brother. At first the gang abused her, two or so years later the gang realized how, off she is, and then more like became her family, this is where her knowledge of weapons, and her love for violence.
At the young age, she was introduced to crime, she robbed small, not well armed stores, and other things of the sort.
Four years later, a woman found her with the gang, and she didn't know that the gang was like Zella's family, and took her away. Zella, was confused, for the gang cared, but no where near this woman did. The woman took her to her house, going to take her to the orphanage the next day, Zella acted sweet and scared, where she was really going insane, she was always off. The gang made it worse. In the middle of the night, she went of killing the woman's daughters. The oldest, the only son, got Zella in a hold, as the called the cops. The cops took her to the insane asylum, a demon saw the hate in Zella, as she escaped. She was given demon powers, and her wings, from the demon that saw her hate and anger.



Art trades/fan art/commissions/other art:
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Zella (c): Me.